Forms Story Revision

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I have a story that needs revision

It is important that this is on time for it is the last assignment.

Stories: Form Analysis

The portfolio must include a revised version of the long story you workshopped this semester. In addition, you should include between 2-3 revisions of your favorite creative exercises. The goal is to present a collection of your very best work that engages with the parameters of the forms that they represent.

Revision means significant changes regarding clarity of story line, development of characters, possible structural changes or additional scenes, and no mechanical or grammatical errors. Proofing your stories by reading it aloud and make edits accordingly. Revisions should demonstrate your creative writing skills and a mastery of the writing process.

My remarks: Professor’s Comments

Based on my previous comments, he notes my professor did on the essay. A lot of the history needs to be taken out of the story and the character needs to be put in most of the story to tell his story and everything that’s happened to him and stuff because there was too much history and not enough of the actual story. That is remove all history parts and add with personal story that aids in developing the character and plot.

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